violenceless is a good option.
is good to see that not all the stickMans are killing each other.
seriously, great animation, keep the hard work
violenceless is a good option.
is good to see that not all the stickMans are killing each other.
seriously, great animation, keep the hard work
Almost perfect
Topic, Information, animation, rithm, dinamic, music... its almost everithing perfect, only art can be improved
Scary moovie 2
that's where you got the dialog and probably the sound, isn't it?
you better mencion it
Actually, I got it from the ORIGINAL BUDWEISER COMMERCIAL.
Pay attention to the audio. You'll find it's quite different from Scary Movie 2.
Bad
Animation needs a lot more effort and the music doesn't stop so it craked my ears. put an stop all sownds once you start animation and at the end of it
Really sorry about the quality it sucks yes but i didn't mean to keep that low bit sound
For serious!!!
You realy have too much influense to keep this thing up, It's realy lame.
I can't say what is wrong because I don't have enought characters and can't say what's right because there is nothing
this one is actualy fun
OK, this one is actually fun, more over because I know that pain...
One single thing, even if it's not a masterpiece yet, you can improve it a lot while adding play and replay buttons and a stop script in a blank key frame at the end of the flash.
I put those in but i dunno what happened to em, thanks for the review anyway
Please, be selective
Even if is not bad for a quickie, please, don't post every work you do just because
If it's something that can be improved, and you can improve it, do it before posting it.
I think you know what's wrong about this animation, almost everything (unless color and some draw)
Dully noted
Is this a finished project?
If art portal has an option in the submitting page to make clear if you are uploading a sketch or a finished project, there should be the same for the flash portal.
This animation can only be understood as a sketch, there is no plot, no sound, no time, one of the shorter ones I've ever seen.
yeah...i read the stuff....i know how to do this....and yes it is finished.its not really my best piece of work...and it wasn't right with sound(and my sound wasn't working right...).it was green when it was a sketch..what more do you want me to do? take it down?
There is skill but not a plan.
Just for beginning, taking the picks at night would have being much beter, besides you just destroyed -breaking the law- of -Judas priest- with that lame quality, you should import it directly or search for an MP3 or Middy version.
Next time try to add some plot on the animation, which would be great.
On the other hand the pictures edit work is very good and animation isn't bad.
Keep practicing.
Somewhere between Bleezard and Marble
Age 36, Male
Student/3D designer
Universidad de Buenos Aires
Argentina
Joined on 11/30/09