almost perfect
it's overall gret exept for one single detail... thelogo.
As you pasted the original logo image over your own render, notice that the light angle beatween them does not match. it seriously makes a lot of noice (is in fact one of the most common fails on photo-editing). either while changing your focus position or rediong the logo in the same 3D file (in order to make the light angle match) would make a perfect piece out of it.
Again, the render is great, it just one step away of 10/10