Manuel-Dangelo's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Park Our]

violenceless is a good option.

is good to see that not all the stickMans are killing each other.
seriously, great animation, keep the hard work

["PASSED"]

Don't mess with I-Bot

for you to know, I-Bot is going to be for tha art portal such as A-bot is for the audio portal and P-bot is for the flash portal.
I'm against full flash freedom, I agree with the NG judgment sistem.
about the flash, animation is averange, but you still can improve the art.

[Gray Wolf (Canis Lupus)]

Almost perfect

Topic, Information, animation, rithm, dinamic, music... its almost everithing perfect, only art can be improved

[Megaman Wazzup]

Scary moovie 2

that's where you got the dialog and probably the sound, isn't it?
you better mencion it

Kaminario responds:

Actually, I got it from the ORIGINAL BUDWEISER COMMERCIAL.

Pay attention to the audio. You'll find it's quite different from Scary Movie 2.

[DBZ the Androids (WIP)]

Bad

Animation needs a lot more effort and the music doesn't stop so it craked my ears. put an stop all sownds once you start animation and at the end of it

YZ1 responds:

Really sorry about the quality it sucks yes but i didn't mean to keep that low bit sound

[Peracfutendin]

For serious!!!

You realy have too much influense to keep this thing up, It's realy lame.
I can't say what is wrong because I don't have enought characters and can't say what's right because there is nothing

[OOP_Cursed mouse]

this one is actualy fun

OK, this one is actually fun, more over because I know that pain...
One single thing, even if it's not a masterpiece yet, you can improve it a lot while adding play and replay buttons and a stop script in a blank key frame at the end of the flash.

Giantsockmonster responds:

I put those in but i dunno what happened to em, thanks for the review anyway

[Mario's last jump :(]

Please, be selective

Even if is not bad for a quickie, please, don't post every work you do just because
If it's something that can be improved, and you can improve it, do it before posting it.

I think you know what's wrong about this animation, almost everything (unless color and some draw)

Giantsockmonster responds:

Dully noted

[phoenix wright objection]

Is this a finished project?

If art portal has an option in the submitting page to make clear if you are uploading a sketch or a finished project, there should be the same for the flash portal.

This animation can only be understood as a sketch, there is no plot, no sound, no time, one of the shorter ones I've ever seen.

mushroomcat401 responds:

yeah...i read the stuff....i know how to do this....and yes it is finished.its not really my best piece of work...and it wasn't right with sound(and my sound wasn't working right...).it was green when it was a sketch..what more do you want me to do? take it down?

[Ninja and The City]

There is skill but not a plan.

Just for beginning, taking the picks at night would have being much beter, besides you just destroyed -breaking the law- of -Judas priest- with that lame quality, you should import it directly or search for an MP3 or Middy version.
Next time try to add some plot on the animation, which would be great.

On the other hand the pictures edit work is very good and animation isn't bad.
Keep practicing.